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SlavaB
Open Mic
Posts: 152
Born to Rock
Obsessed
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September 05, 2021, 10:47:55 AM »
Hey folks,
Looking forward to present you for your feedbacks my "dirty minded" sound.
What do you think?
Had to share private link, due to a song not being released yet.
https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/41Kx4
Lyrics in song description.
Thank you.
Best Regards,
Slava B.
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moraamarolaloba
Stadium Tour
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Re: Obsessed
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September 05, 2021, 11:52:18 AM »
Hola
@SlavaB
Nice to meet you.
The sound is strong, and adding your heavy voice ir is a bit scary ... something you were surely looking to achieve ... Good track. 🥶
Mora
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rightly
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Re: Obsessed
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September 05, 2021, 08:14:41 PM »
yes i liked it too.
dirty lyrics, lots of fun
I do think a woman's voice would do well in there.
top guitar sound, well done
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SlavaB
Open Mic
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Born to Rock
Re: Obsessed
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September 05, 2021, 08:50:32 PM »
Thank you.
To be honest i would love to give it a go with female vocals on chorus. Maybe someone here would be interested?
@moraamarolaloba
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ChrisPrice
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Re: Obsessed
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September 11, 2021, 12:09:25 AM »
Yeah, love this! Big guitars and a gritty vocal. As rock n roll goes, it's kinda after my time - I'm old(!) - but this is great..I want to hear more...
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