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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Hearts Mend
« Last post by Elvis Nash on Today at 01:39:39 AM »I just reviewed this on the other page but, again, a fabulous song and that Hammond gives me goosebumps! You're prolific and I'm enjoying every minute of it.
its about 5 year old song , Peter Salis and I wrote ii , I put my spin on it , He had it in B flat , Peter was a staff writer for Demolition publishing , not sure what's up to today
thanks
That turns souls to red rust
And lights turn to dark in a unkind way
But it can turn on a smile if we say hmmm could be to much repetion of turn, just noticed that , subjective ,
Well i'll fix that before going out on a cd , burn to dark, Switch on a smile , damn lol. I don't think Sony is waiting for me , i'll fix 2 words , Well While I'm at it fix fire , sounds like I'm on crutches
Follow him , watch his lyrics , he's not repeating
Man i wish i could sing like him lol