What an incredible piece of music @crystalsuzy There is so much going on here. It must have taken you ages to put this together. So much to take in, it takes a few listens to appreciate everything that is going on. Some lovely tempo and and key changes and thought provoking lyrics. Superb
thanks so much John, means a lot coming from you. I've done a new version with more melody in the verses. Love to know what you think.
This is great. A lot of stuff weaving in and out which I really like. It kind of reminds me of something but I can't put my finger on it. Excellent lyrics which are very appropriate right now. If you get a chance let me know what you think of the new version
Thanks Chris...did you ever think of what it reminded you of? thanks for the thumbs up of the lyrics...most important in this song. Love to hear what you think of the new version.
Hey @crystalsuzy - how lovely to hear something new from you.. And as always it's a feast for my ears.. great lyrics.. really interesting topic to tackle..
Great movement through the whole piece.. almost a number of songs in one but knitted together beautifully..
I know I'll be giving it more listens and will continue to spot stuff I missed the first few times..
Great stuff CS!!! Love it...
K
thanks so much K. It did take some time to put this together and I know it probably sounds like more than one song going on, but that's quite often what happens in my songs. Love to know what you think of the new version.
Hi @crystalsuzy,
Your writing never fails to disappoint,
there are so many musical styles coming together to make this happen. Despite all of the contrasting elements that are evident here, I always look for melody. I enjoy the subtle acoustic guitar parts and think that your vocal is often a joy. This is never more evident than the hummed sections that I find to be an absolute delight.
Paul
thanks so much for you kind comments Paul. I've added little more melody in the verses, so I'm wondering if you like it better than the 1st version.
@crystalsuzy
Oh this is so clever and inspired! Beautifully written and arranged- it's dense and full of ideas but never too fussy. This must have taken bleedin' ages! Your sound and approach is totally unique and I really look forward to hearing your songs. I think this song is maybe a little more direct and muscular than some of your previous work which is perfect with the subject matter - tell it like it is.
Loved it as always
M
Thanks for your lovely comments Alan...you are always so supportive. If you get a chance, do you think the new version sounds any better or is it too fussy now?
@crystalsuzy
Hi Suzy, certainly a lyric in tune with the times.Very well written and executed. Made me think of Grace Slick and Jefferson Airplane. You sang it really well, enjoyed it!
Cheers
Jamie
Thanks much-ly Jamie. Ya, it's definitely a lyrically timely piece...I always feel compelled to write about stuff like this. You're right, it does have that 'White Rabbit' kind of vibe...drums I guess. Do you think the new version is any better?
@crystalsuzy a really complex and engaging listen! Some very clever lyrics, love ‘trump card’s in the attic’ part and the way it the whole thing cranks up at that point... I love the layered vocal treatment, and the hummed hook.... great production overall too👌
thanks so much MMM. I appreciate your supportive comments. I love the upbeat sections as well. If you get a chance let me kno what you think of the new version.
@crystalsuzy I agree with the comment regarding Grace Slick. Lots going on here musically and some thought provoking lyrics.
A couple of minor suggestions : the "Conspiracy Theory ...." spoken lines could be slightly lower volume ( maybe just my headphones). Also, the drums are a little uneven in places. However, those are very minor ( and probably just personal) nits.
Nice work, Kevin
Thanks Kevin. I've lowered the volume of the spoken bits and added more melody in the verses so let me know if it sounds any better. Not sure where the drums aren't quite on...can you let me know? thanks
Very interesting stuff and well up to your usual productions. Great harmonies and I especially liked it when you hit the high notes.
I am sure we'll never know what is true and what not, but the point is not to believe anything without some critical thought which is very easy for many to forget.
thanks for your kind comments Adam. Glad you liked the harmonies and you're right, we'll probably never know for sure whats true or not, but I do like to explore all the aspects, in a questioning way. If you get a chance let me know what you think of the new version. Thanks