I liked the clever guitar riffing and the chorus is very catchy - and well sung too.
Yeah, it's mainly production issues that are less favourable, but if you are a muso or a band, well then production experts can fix that, and you shouldn't worry about it too much for now. If you can write hook lines like are on show in this song, and all these clever vocal interplays, well that's where your talent lies. Well done!