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Feedback on Finished songs / been away for a while...
« Last post by AJ Bruce on Today at 11:39:51 AM »
First of all a little background...
I've dipped in and out of this group many times before but I've struggled with my place in all this and have lost count of the number of times I've thrown in the towel ...only to pick it up again.

A bit older now and more accepting of the fact I'm a hobby songwriter and I write these songs for fun now and dreams of any recognition beyond that are well and truly put to bed.

I am fairly prolific on the songwriting front - I started back in 2018 under the illustion of being a "band" but it was just me and a bass guitar and some effects and I released three EPs using this bass only set up... then I started dablling in more conventional electric guitar and released an EP paying tribute to my Grunge influnced days, followed by another album of bits and pieces that further developed my guitar playing.

I then hit a big lull and took down all my music as I was convinced I was done with it.. only to re-release it under my own name as a songwriter.

Now I find myself in some sort of punky / folky / trad scots territory which I will be honest I never saw coming.. which brings me to my latest song.. The Deal... it was influenced by the film highlander (and maybe slightly be tenacious D / Tribute  ;D)

Spotify link
https://open.spotify.com/album/7qob7RtNXVBp6q55paMusS?si=RR1n9TUgTVavINynX9QfUg

Apple music link
https://music.apple.com/us/album/the-deal-feat-richard-ross/1743825460?i=1743825461

youtube link
i=j0WWT2f6eHmX_4TR

and lyrics below

From the sleep of the dead
I was roused from my bed
and a pistol was thrust in my hand

We do or we die
was the rallying cry
my brothers and I made our stand

When the call to advance
filtered out through the ranks
well I shook from my head to my toes

Would I ever return
to the place that I yearn
from this field where the wild heather grows

Well we fought and we bled
keeping score with the dead
and with little remorse I’ll confess

I stared down my foe
but my blade was too slow
and his spear found its mark on my chest

I remember that day
as I faded away
and the light left my eyes as they closed

then the world turned to black
I was dead on my back
in a field where the wild heather grows

Well the devil he rose
from his throne made of bones
and he said there’s a road you can take

but it carries a toll
and the price is your soul
if a deals what you are willing to make

so my thoughts turned to home
and the life that I’d know
and I begged for forgiveness and chose

Then I opened my eyes
staring up at the sky
in a field where the wild heather grows

Precious few from that day
made it back from the fray
and returned to the home that we knew

My family they wept
I was bound by my debt
to the devil and payment was due

so they pushed and they jeered
driven on by the fear
I was exiled in nought but my clothes

though my body survived
sure a part of me died
in that field where the wild heather grows

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Hola @Paul V

Beautiful and calm backing for such a raw but poetic lyrics... I liked it a lot, I adore that accordion that suddenly appears... The lyrics? a reality for all of us that we try to ignore, it seems.
Labels? It's a word I hate hahaha but apparently the pack needs signs to show them a path... generally all current paths lead to personal destruction

Sorry for joking, I'm that unconscious or joking, whichever you prefer.
It has been a very pleasant listen, a very soft sound.

Have a ice day @Paul V
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: You (are not broken)
« Last post by moraamarolaloba on Today at 09:46:30 AM »
WOw. It's the first song of my morning and I thoroughly enjoyed it!!! totally unique, unexpected, personal, with a great, clean, defined sound, and that special way of delivering the melody, slowly, supporting each word. I loved it, you should not be afraid of having your work accepted, I think it is excellent!!  @Dorian
Good week!
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Sophisticated and articulate.
Anutha stunna from you

The categorising, it might rarely serve a purpose.
It does get overly used, by little people who feel entitled to
have an opinion about everything.

A full album in one week
I'm happy when I get 1.5 songs together in a week.
Friends seem to think I'm productive.

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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Midnight Utopias
« Last post by Paul V on Yesterday at 09:03:05 PM »
hello @moraamarolaloba

Striking pulsating synth bass and wonderfully clear vocals.  Lovely, sparse production where your voice is allowed to breathe amongst elements of the soundscape.  Good use of instrumentation which is both inviting and challenging.  There is much to like here.  Well done

Paul
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How we feel inside (working title “Labels Define”).

I hadn’t written for several months and it began to gnaw away at me.  I never think I’ll lose the ability to write, however, now and then, I have to prove this to myself.  So began a frantic period of writing in which I wrote a full album in a week.  I haven’t done that before and perhaps never will do so again.  A big thank you  (and apology) to John @pompeyjazz . I sent a new song to him every day for 7 or eight days as I laid the foundations of a new album called  “Home Of Kings”. 

“How We Feel Inside”.  was the first song written for this project.  Many of the ideas simply crept into my subconscious.  Suffice to say I have a strong dislike for the labels “Generation Z and X.  They are in my opinion simply not helpful.  We’re all people in this crazy mixed-up world, trying our best to get through life and hopefully derive enjoyment and happiness from aspects of the journey. 

I initially had a lovely guitar vocal version of this.  I then went on to add various instruments including accordion which is one of my favourites.  Hopefully the lyrics might engage.  They are simply my observations of the world in which we live.

 “Labels define, undermine and divide.  They couldn’t tell you how we feel inside.

https://soundcloud.com/paulanthonyvasey/how-we-feel-inside

How we feel inside

It’s such a fucked up world.
I once believed that  I would turn it on its head.
Who did I fool?
Unprepared, I  quietly closed the door then left for school.

Generation Z, that’s a phrase that should be dead.
Why aren’t we one?
Labels define, undermine and divide.
They couldn’t tell you how we feel inside.

It’s such a lottery.
I do believe if you could stand inside these shoes you’d see.
Lost to our youth.
We’re living proof that no one’s getting out of this alive.

Generation X, regardless of your sex, we’re still the same.
Labels define undermine and divide.
They couldn’t tell you how we feel inside.

A face in the mirror, growing old, tired of pain.
In life, nothing ever stays the same.
May love remain.

Love,

Remain.

Love,

Remain.

Written by Paul Vasey March 2024

https://soundcloud.com/paulanthonyvasey/how-we-feel-inside
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Feedback on Finished songs / Midnight Utopias
« Last post by moraamarolaloba on Yesterday at 08:45:08 PM »


A ver qué pasa!!!

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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Do You Want To Get A Taxi ?
« Last post by Elvis Nash on Yesterday at 06:32:19 PM »
You don't sound like a amateur. Yeah most pros use PRO Tools on a a Apple for whatever reason, Probably cuz they see less ads on Trump . PC was designed by the Kardashians  All a amateur is 10 steps away before they're professional.
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Do You Want To Get A Taxi ?
« Last post by pompeyjazz on Yesterday at 06:12:34 PM »
@subvibe Thanks so much - Yes, I mashed it up a bit

@moraamarolaloba Thank you Mora - It was indeed a very strange queue

@Elvis Nash Thanks Elvis, No, I don't use pro-tools, I use Reaper. I believe that Pro-Tools is the number one choice of pro producers but as I'm strictly amateur I'm quite happy with Reaper

@PaulAds What another great Taxi queue story. I remember that I preferred to run the 3 miles home that to wait in that particular queue !I think it's the smell that I remember the most. A heady mix of vomit, Carling Black Label, Benson & Hedges, Urine, sweat, chips and Aramis. With regard to my mixing, I've not really changed anything major over the past few years. I reckon that you can get incredibly bogged down with all of the VST stuff sometimes. The drums are EZ Drummer but I've also got a Xpand2 drum loop really low in the mix with a dance beat. The only new VST that I've used quite extensively is the UAD CLA2 compressor which Paul V recommended when it was available as a freebie.

@Paul V Thanks Paul - Ah ! I forgot the Kebabs - A staple of a night out in Town !

@rightly Thanks so much - I bet those clubs in Manchester are as crazy as they have always been !
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: You (are not broken)
« Last post by Elvis Nash on Yesterday at 03:43:06 PM »
What ya worried about the world for ? they're all juvenile delinquents
Cool song
Release it
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