Hi tammynone.
I'm not trying to be rude, but I recommend you read the
guidelines. One song is allowed per 14 days, and you need to post the lyrics.
I did listen to part of the song, but I can't understand all the words, so I'll wait until you post the lyrics before I listen to the rest and give any feedback.
Welcome to the forums! I think you'll like it here. We have a very nice and friendly community. Why not hop over to the
introductions forum and tell us a little about yourself?
Vicki