[postmn]

 Quick lyrics,made in 5min,around 5am (need work)


Is it all luck,
we seem to be running out of time,
is it all enough,
 we seem to be turning blind
So are we sure!, we can the turn tide,
im full of life, ur hearts dying with time,
so I wanna know!
What do you really care for,
cos we all got mistakes,..
the pain,the breaks,
its all cos we all gotta learn.

Its easy to say no,I’ll let you know though,
im shaking in my boots
but im wanting it alllllllllllll,
This our chance!,to stake a claim on love,
this our night!,to tell the stars to shine bright,
and just lose controoooollllll.
This life! and every moment is ours,
and it just might!…
knock you down a few bars,
 so what!
I’ll stillll be with you.

(breakdown)
And when the morning comes
Cold plaguing our sheets
Body to body, ohhhh
Picture it now,
the perfect scene
….no dreams for me

[titiami]

its a good start, the second verse is really strong, take your time to finish it coz its got to come out right the same way it started right.  its good.

[Reece!]

i loved it at the start but in the end i didn't know where it went and it felt rushed but i really enjoyed reading it and i cant stop reading it

-Reece!

[Kayles86]

Realy good lyrics going on there. In verse 1 its like you can feel what you have written

Kayles86

[BooBoo]

I quite enjoyed reading it. I would finish it because to me it's seems to have something powerful about it. And you wrote that in around 5 minutes???  it is good!