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Songwriter Forum => Lyrics => Topic started by: SickPup96 on May 08, 2012, 08:54:15 PM
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verse:
There is a monster..inside my head.
I can feel it..weaving its web..
Someday..i know....itll break out..
Someday..i hope....I wont have to find out
Prechorus:
Cant u save me.From this bitter end.
Can you help me save what is left!?
Chorus:
Can't you see, theres an animal in me
Can you see im truly suffering.
Can you even..care about me!?
Can---you---save---me---from the animal in me!
Cant you see, theres another part me
I dont want..to live and be
The only good part of insanity
Cant---you---save---me---from the animal in me!
Verse:
Well you can't take...away from me
I don't want to be...your enemy
Hopefully..I will...find a way out
Hopefully..I hope..it'll stay down
Chorus:
Can't you see, theres an animal in me
Can you see, im truly suffering
Cant you even..care about me!?
Can--you--save--me--from the animal in me!
Can't you see, theres another part of me
I dont want..to live and be
The only good part of insanity
Cant---you---save---me---from the animal in me!
(Darker side of me!(Me) me!)
Bridge:
Cant you remember how, I was left to live without
Cant you figure out, how ill be the one to take u down
Can you live to see, the requim of sanity
Cause I--Cant--Save--You---From The animal in me!
Chorus:
Can't you see, I've found a way to be
Can you see(This fuckin animal in me!)
Can you even..care about me!?
Can---you---save---me---from the animal in me!
Cant you see, theres another part me
I dont want..to live and be
The only good part of insanity
Cant---you---save---me---from the animal in me!
comments criticism?
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Hey Pup, reckon you can review some other people's work first? We're actually soon bringing in some rules against posting your own songs without reviewing other's songs so now's a good time to get into the habit :)