Nice simplistic take on the lyricism, displaying an almost utopian vision of the world; what could be. Although some may this as a folk cliché , wanting a world where nothing bad happens. Yet counter culture is folk in a nutshell anyway, so who cares.. The chords work, didn't sound too repetitive as the song wasn't too long, I liked that it didn't have a chorus actually.. though some may disagree (could have a key change in the chorus etc) .. Keep the creativity up!! Peace
Outss