Ive been writing so much recently, sorry for posting so much but some of the tips ive got from people have helped. This is the beginnings of a song ive been mulling over recently. I usually write folk songs - but this one i thought would fit better with an indie rock, punk or maybe more poppy sounding treatment. Anyway tell me what you think
Bm E Bm E D E D E
Stomping on the microphone
The paper’s hate but can’t leave her alone
Ushered out of back doors
Her greatest fears to be ignored
Maintains her proper station
Her manners and her poise
Critics make their observations
And she’s loved by all the boys
Group sessions
Replace the lessons
Of the schools that she despised
She goes to see a doctor
bout the girl behind her eyes
A slave to her infamy
Intoxicants and chemistry
Fuel the thing behind the eyes
She’s too afraid to live cos she’s too afraid to die
written by lawrence. s ©
