[CaliaMoko]

Hi Vicki.......your project sounds fun  Any chance i could get a copy of the lead sheet? I'll hang it in a frame 
The actual chords I recorded with are Gm / E / B / F 

Thanks, again!

Sure! The timing of the notes will likely not be precisely the way they're sung, but it'll be close enough to follow. I have it started but not finished yet.

Vicki

[IronKnee]

Hi Vicki.......your project sounds fun  Any chance i could get a copy of the lead sheet? I'll hang it in a frame 
The actual chords I recorded with are Gm / E / B / F 

Thanks, again!

Sure! The timing of the notes will likely not be precisely the way they're sung, but it'll be close enough to follow. I have it started but not finished yet.

Vicki

Thanks Vicki 

[RothenborgLopez]

Hi Tom!

Good song! I like your voice. I like the lyrics. I don't like the production so much though. It could be improved with a little bit less high end. Don't really have so much to say actually. It sounds like a complete song and you've done a good job. Only feedback I have is on the production. Keep it up!

[Wolfini]

Wow, I have always been a big fan of your more quiet acoustic songs, but this goes in a new direction and is just as great.

The lyrics are superb, and I really love the way you sing on here.

Absolutely no nits from me, and maybe it will get some play time on my guitar, too. ;-)

Bye Wolfi

[IronKnee]

Hi Tom!

Good song! I like your voice. I like the lyrics. I don't like the production so much though. It could be improved with a little bit less high end. Don't really have so much to say actually. It sounds like a complete song and you've done a good job. Only feedback I have is on the production. Keep it up!

Thanks for stopping by and commenting! Always much appreciated.

Wow, I have always been a big fan of your more quiet acoustic songs, but this goes in a new direction and is just as great.

The lyrics are superb, and I really love the way you sing on here.

Absolutely no nits from me, and maybe it will get some play time on my guitar, too. ;-)

Bye Wolfi

Thank you soooooo much for the encouragement, Wolfi 


And, thanks to all who have listened!
                                                                -Tom

[delb0y]

This is super. Great lyrics, your always-fine vocals with that lovely tone, a super chorus, and a guitar solo too. What's not to like? This should go on your album with all those other songs of yours!

[montydog]

Hi Tom,

You know I think you're one of the most talented people on here and this illustrates that perfectly. Great blend of fine playing, arrangement, vocal, melody and lyrics. It's a very strong original concept and you built some lovely lyrical ideas to illustrate the theme. It maybe needs a bridge or "C" section to just lift it away from the verse/chorus pattern for a little while. One less verse with a bridge would have improved it IMHO.

Nevertheless, superb work.

M