Thanks for the feedback guys, really appreciate it. @John, I'm a huge Queen fan so it's great to hear you found it reminiscent. I'm still trying to figure out how to get their massive BV harmony sound, though...
This is very musical theatre in style so I would take the concept album one step further and go full on musical.
I've been toying with this idea since conception, but think some songs I have so far don't quite take the leap and are more my usual style. I'll have to decide when the project is done. Would be amazing/hilarious to see this on stage somewhere, though.
Perhaps your final mix will have to introduce a little more emotion towards the end where the child is telling us she's scared but doesn't really sound it.
Excuse me for bringing it up but you don't look like you've seen that many summers by your avatar? I think you and your sister are going to go as far with music as want to go. As Del Boy would say 'The world's your lobster!' ... You're definitely too young for that reference.
Cheers ShinyThang, I'll revisit those vocals with my Sis and see what I can do about making them sound more emotional. And you're right, that reference is lost on me ahaha
Regarding my age, I think the avatar is probably quite kind. I'm actually 21. I've been writing since I was 16 and recording for the last few years.