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QUEEN OF THE DARKNESS

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Marc Ocram

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« on: August 29, 2015, 04:18:58 PM »
It's quite a long time I haven't been here, but now the work's done :D

This is my latest song, a country song, called "Queen Of The Darkness".
Please let me know what you think about it.

https://soundcloud.com/marc-ocram/queen-of-the-darkness


~QUEEN OF THE DARKNESS~
(Words & Music: Marc Ocram)


Verse 1:   As she went to Hollywood she didn’t know where to live
      She didn’t know the reasons and she didn’t know what it will bring
      Now she don’t know why she has done this and she don’t know why she cries
      She don’t know what’s wrong with her life, doesn’t understand this try

Bridge 1:   But then she walks down to the river
      And everything she sees
      Is a tear rolls down her face
      A tear which belongs to me

Chorus:   She’s the queen of the darkness
      She walks down the street alone
      She is the queen of the darkness
      But she ain’t got no home
      She’s the queen of the darkness
      Yeah she can’t come back home this night
      She is the queen of the darkness
      But she’s losing all her pride

Verse 2:   She had a dream, it was so big, be a movie star someday
      But the way of this world, it was so hard, hit her on this way
      Now she’s working down in the restaurant, everyday and every night
      But she can’t go on this way – drowned in the tide

Bridge 2:   Yeah she walked down to the river
      And everything she saw
      Was a tear big a the sea
      A tear which once belonged to me

Chorus:   She’s the queen of the darkness
      She walks down the street alone
      She is the queen of the darkness
      But she ain’t got no home
      She’s the queen of the darkness
      Yeah she can’t come back home this night
      She is the queen of the darkness
      But she’s losing all her pride

Outro:   And so my queen of the darkness
      I’ll promise you this one
      This will always be forever your song
      This will always be forever your song


© by Marc Ocram
Are you a singer? Need songs?
Just visit me on SoundCloud: https://soundcloud.com/marc-ocram

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« Reply #1 on: August 30, 2015, 08:27:20 AM »
Great production on this...you have a great voice and it's an excellent song too...very well polished.

I like the idea of the queen of the darkness working in a restaurant...

I'll get into the habit of leaving a tip, just in case  :)

A great listen.
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