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jim morrison
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blue train
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July 10, 2012, 06:48:22 PM »
One to mull over guys, experimenting with the drop tunings lately,
advice /tips always appreciated
many thanks
matt
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July 10, 2012, 07:07:22 PM »
You own the blues Matt!...
I liked it ,so i stuck it in my favourites,,,in fact i`m chilling after a days work , with a glass of red vino,,and that was good to listen to.
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evanjavo
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July 10, 2012, 07:19:04 PM »
Just a cool tune man. This might just be me, but it reminds of something off of Trigun, which I totally dig. Pure quality!
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man of simple pleasures
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July 10, 2012, 08:38:08 PM »
fantastic stuuf this like, cant beat the blues, you got some tunes like, dust bowl rain clouds kid brother!
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estreet
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July 10, 2012, 09:58:18 PM »
Really like this Matt. Some great sounds there too - love the bit in the middle where the drum-kit falls downstairs!
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UnknownLegend
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July 10, 2012, 09:58:28 PM »
Brilliant!!
Love the echo/harmony bits!
Love it
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July 11, 2012, 01:46:30 AM »
This is the best thing I've heard from you mate and that's saying something because I really
like lots of your other stuff.
Can't think of anything to say that could improve it because it's already ace
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July 11, 2012, 10:37:34 AM »
Oh yes!
I love the vibe on this - what a great slide part, vocals are suburb and I love the repeated phrase. This track is so atmospheric with loads of space for the instruments to breathe. Just one problem - it was over too soon; I wanted it to go on for another 10 minutes at least!
Really top notch stuff
Alan
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July 11, 2012, 11:56:43 AM »
Yes, add me to the list...loved this.....great old time blues feel....Great voice...excellent song
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James Nighthawk
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July 11, 2012, 11:16:27 PM »
Blues with added deep electronica. Very interesting. Kinda something Beck might have done if he went further in each direction, in one track (this is more blues than I have heard him do). I am really digging this. I feel it could possibly be developed further if you were inclined. Make it a nice long piece with clear sections, really work the vibe over and build to a climax.
Loving the Tank engine Jpeg too
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bewarethisboy
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July 13, 2012, 05:57:36 PM »
Cooler than a penguins parts my friend. Are you in open G?? Love it - any chance of it moving to a lovely blues guitar break just to really finish it off? Good job - more more more. BTB
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