[Marrianna]

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[tomcrocus]

Hi Marrianna,
                   i thought this would have had some feedback by now
but maybe the forumites are preoccupied.
I think it's wonderful,i'm amazed that you can write something that
is so long but something that keeps you captivated from start to finish,
it's just so clever and witty,i absolutely take my hat off to you,
                                                                                     best regards,Tom.

[Marrianna]

Hi Marrianna,
                   i thought this would have had some feedback by now
but maybe the forumites are preoccupied.
I think it's wonderful,i'm amazed that you can write something that
is so long but something that keeps you captivated from start to finish,
it's just so clever and witty,i absolutely take my hat off to you,
                                                                                     best regards,Tom.

Hi Tom,

Thankyou for reading to the end :-) and it is lovely news that you appreciated it.
I have just made a slight alteration on the line about turning the tap off. This was because 'so quickly' didn't fit with the rhythm when I tried it with the Delany's Donkey music. Cutting the line down made the rhythm make better sense, which you probably noticed.
It means a lot that you enjoyed the tale as you know I always enjoyed your own special work.

Thankyou again
From
Marrianna

[Marrianna]

Re: A Fishy Tale deleted now but thankyou to everyone who viewed.

Marrianna
http://soundcloud.com/marriannasongs