I have a song that I have been working on for quite a while. It is called "Little Boy Blue". I have a very rough recording of it (I am not much of a singer/musician) that will give a general idea. I would love to have someone record it who is more talented than me. I have a problem with the chorus (more of a refrain). It is generic and not interesting. Any suggestions would be great! Even a complete redone chorus would be great. I can provide chords if anyone is interested. The chords do not match up to lyrics correctly when copying into forum. Thank you.
https://soundcloud.com/ctonyp/little-boy-blue-dec2014Little Boy Blue
Little Boy Blue, barely four years old
And his teen-aged mama, how she loved him so
But the crying of the drugs screamed so much louder than him
He was left by himself, for days at a time
Scrounging for scraps, and covered in grime
While mama’s latest flame left his body broken and bruised
Ooh, ooh….Little Boy Blue…
It could’ve been me, it could’ve been you
Little Boy Blue was finally taken away
Placed with a family in a place far away
It may not be his home but, thank God, at least he was safe
He spent a couple years bouncing home to home
Causin’ all kinds of trouble and he thinks he knows
If he wasn’t such a bad little boy, maybe then he could stay
Ooh, ooh….Little Boy Blue….
It could’ve been me, it could’ve been you
Then a couple was willing to make him their own
Not just for a while, but until he is grown
Sharing life, love, and laughter and even give him their name
No more, Little Boy Blue
No, no more, Little Boy Blue
No no no no no, Little Boy Blue, blue, no…
No no no no no, Little Boy Blue
Just like that little boy all broken within
Isolated from God, and abused by sin
Then God gave His only Son, to give us new life
No more, Little Boy Blue
No, no more, Little Boy Blue
No no no no no, Little Boy Blue, blue, no…
No no no no no, Little Boy Blue