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Songwriter Forum => Feedback on Finished songs => Topic started by: vioslette on April 26, 2021, 08:50:40 PM

Title: Fifteen
Post by: vioslette on April 26, 2021, 08:50:40 PM
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This is a song for my best friend's birthday and I have 1 hour to finish the lyrics... :(
I thought a '''cause when you're fifteen'' part before chorus but... yeah.
Can you help me with that please?  :-[