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Carpe Diem
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Yodasdad
Stadium Tour
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Re: Carpe Diem
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Reply #15 on:
January 13, 2019, 02:14:59 PM »
Unmistakebly Shadowfax from the first word... and beutifully crafted.
This track evokes so many images and emotions.
There is a sadness and longing to it, a state I can't risk staying in for too long for my own emotional wellbeing but you create that imagery really well.
Top quality as usual.
Yodasdad.
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redrhodie
Platinum Album
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Re: Carpe Diem
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Reply #16 on:
January 13, 2019, 03:13:25 PM »
Well sung, and great production. I like the ending. The lyrics will move lots of teenage girls, who will think you're just dreamy. Haha. I think that's your target, so you're right on the mark.
Lynn
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LostBoy
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Re: Carpe Diem
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Reply #17 on:
January 20, 2019, 10:04:13 PM »
Yeah man!! Another lovely cinematic piece from you! Very easy on my ears, no nits from me! Mix sounds great, guitar solo sounds fab!! Fab fab fab stuff! 😄🎶👊🏻🎶
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cowparsleyman
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Re: Carpe Diem
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Reply #18 on:
January 21, 2019, 12:55:07 PM »
@shadowfax
- Nice piece indeed, I can imagine it as a rom-com film piece, I like the drums in particular.
2:56 Chorus thought that there could be some more HVox tracking the LVox, lose the organ, it kind of muffles/smudges the rest of it.
A very nice piece of work
btw, why shadowfax? - always wondered that
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SlavaB
Open Mic
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Born to Rock
Re: Carpe Diem
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January 21, 2019, 01:36:41 PM »
Extremely "light" song
Good composition overall and im pretty sure it does have a good potential.
Really enjoyed the drum sets.
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Slava B.
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