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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Hearts Mend
« Last post by Elvis Nash on Yesterday at 08:23:46 PM »Ok
its being mixed again ,after Bgvs Mora
Thanks
its being mixed again ,after Bgvs Mora
Thanks
Hey Nick how are ya ?
Man real nice production on this , really enjoyed it !!!
A lot of cools things going on in right in places . I don't think you would call that a demo , more of a master recording Nick
So this is a really great song. I listened to Demo 3 right after btw, so comments really based more on that. Further to what I said on the WIP thread, I think the strings aren't really there yet. I love everything else (especially the guitar parts), but the strings are just "fine". They're being played more like a pad, but I think you have scope to make them a bit busier, particularly on phrases where there's no singing. You could use parts of the vocal melody in there, and play them like little motifs for example.
I feel slightly foolish because you're ahead of me in most regards of production, but that's what stands out to my ears. Great work as usual though.
Nice to meet you, welcome to the bus!!! I enjoyed listening to your song, wonderful production, a very actual an balanced mix, vocals, arrangement, really catchy too!!!
Hasta luego!!! Nice lyrics! @Neumi