For sale: 3 verses about dogs. Never used... This was in the lyrics section a while back with three additional verses which I now decided were just two complicated and too much.
It's turned into a little Stax soul number. Lots of firsts for me here (probably not too hard to guess what they are...)
As always your constructive and specific feedback is really appreciated!
Comments such as "You're no Otis Redding" are unnecessary. I know that. I am Otis Farr.
Tell Them I'm a Dog
https://soundcloud.com/lutehill/dog-15-04-2016aV1
You can tell them I'm lazy
Low and uncouth
You can tell them I'm a dog
You can tell them I'm crazy
Loud and a brute
You can tell them I'm a dog
CH
But did you tell them how selfless
How endless my love was for you?
You tell them I'm a dog
You better tell the whole truth
Tell the whole truth
V2
You can tell them I'm greedy
Of zero repute
You can tell them I'm a dog
You can tell them I 'm dirty
Rowdy and rude
You can tell them I'm a dog
CH
M8
Sometimes I pulled you forward
Sometimes you held me back
Sometimes we walked on parallel paths
Sometimes tempted by scents
Oh, I have to confess
But I always, always went where you went
CH
(c) Adam Farr, 2016