Hey all!
Would love to get some feedback on this track.
https://soundcloud.com/micky-shiloah/cloudsClouds is a song about getting high. Not necessarily on drugs--but on anything in life that takes you to a "cloud nine" and makes you happy -- and the desire to stay there. Any form of happiness is a drug that we, as humans, crave.
Lyrics:
I wanna live forever
I wanna build a life anew
I wanna make it better
I want the sun for me and you
Still up at five in the morning
Waiting for my turn in line
But I get stuck I can't find the warning
(So I'm) Searching for the party line
And if you wanna smoke we can just go down (go down)
If you wanna get high we can start dancing on the clouds
Let's forget about life and the run around (run around)
Stay with me in the stardust
Let's try
To live before we die
In love surrounded by all the lights (the lights)
Chorus (Oh, oh, oh...)
If you feel you're coming back
I'll give you some more
I wanna feel like I'm floating even though i'm on the floor
I want our eyes to meet
And our hands to touch
I want to feel the beat when my face gets flushed
It's kicking it in to gear you're getting the rush
Let's never end
I fucking love this stuff
Chorus:
I don't want to leave this cloud
I just want to stay here for forever
For ever and ever
I don't want to leave this cloud
Wanna stay here for forever
For ever and ever
Chorus repeats
Thanks guys! Any feedback is greatly appreciated