I love the way this starts and builds up all that momentum, with the electric guitars coming in before the vocals start.
All in all, this has a more poppy feel to it than everything else I've heard from you so far.
For me the song comes along really nicely, until "I gotta keep on running" - with the short break after that I expected the song to come back to the "Rolling down the road" part (which I think sounds more like a verse anyway)
If it were me, I'd start with "Rolling down the road" as a verse, then one of the 5-lines parts ("dunno where I'm going") as chorus, followed by "rubber making rumble" as the 2nd verse and another chorus.
The guitar solo is very cool as a break. Maybe add in a bridge after that?
Just my 2 cents, feel free to ignore...
I also really like James' idea about call responses.
Anyway, you're on to something with this, keep us posted about the finished version