@jacksimmons - Jack I really dig your work, you have a natural songwiting gene, that's really as much of a gift as being born a natural pianist, etc.
I appreciate your un quantisedmore organic approach, and it really improves a guitar and Vocal song like this, they make it believable, easier to dive in and get the vibe, I never quantise my audio tracks...when you see a live band they don't quantise anything, and nobody complains.
As for the song, yip, really good work hooky as hell, and well produced, especially the LVox, lovely verb.
Clever balance of acoustic and electric Gtrs.
I think the only thing I'd look at would be the drums, give em a bit more punch and raise em up in the mix a bit, the kick would give it a big of oomph and possibly bring the BVox, in a bit earlier.
A lovely listen
Rich