Autumn Leaves
Ok, so this just the draft with no arrangement but both vocals and guitars are about 80%. There are a couple of key changes but that is mainly to give some more option to the arrangement later on.
I was thinking before I start finalizing my vocal performance if someone could help verify the lyrics and prenanciation as english is not my native language. Any words of sentences sound off?
Solemn leaves in autumn hue
Entangle yellow and red,
through autumn nights,
they lay soft brown at my feet
on the streets I am walking
Until the first winter snow
shields them away
Under birch, on quiet roads in October rain
I have been walkning alone
And I have been thinking of life and of love
And for so long it was here I belonged
While autumn lay
On heavy branches in quiet evening rain
I won’t let trouble reach me here
Oh no, Not anymore
time with you, its been the best Ive known
oh Jesus, look down on us,
just help me make this right
but its no sacrifice, Im glad I came here
from a radio that old song plays,
but the words feel somehow new
Im just so glad you came and that you stayed
that you are here with me,
you are my best friend
and I hope you feel the same way too
you came to me
how its strange how life happens
how it changed with you
And If the cloads should turn dark and full of rain
and if the cold wind blows,
its for better and for worse
but in this life, our time together
thats where true strength lay
for sure
And as as I watch
the evening rains of autumn, I see
Oh Woman, how I cherish
How I love you
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