Thanks to all who posted a comment - much appreciated.
@ TheButcher, digger72, Jamie, Nooms, DMbandit and Dutchbeat - Thanks for your lovely comments and appreciation of the song. I do put a lot of work in and it's all worth it when it strikes a chord.
@Benjo - Thanks for commenting. This was a bit awkward as I wouldn't have written this without your original lyrics but then I can't give a writer's credit because it's all my work :-( I take your point about there being a lot going on but I think it works in the context of the song and it maintains interest. It's a hard line to tread between it being too sparse and being too busy.
@Liilypilly, Paulski - You are probably right :- it would benefit from being a bit less smooth and a bit edgier but that's not my style. I don't have a very gritty voice and I can't play electric guitar to save my life so it is going to come out sounding maybe a bit smooth.
@NeilC - Thanks for your feedback on the instrumentation and I think you're right about the reverb levels - need to cut back! I normally have 2 verses before I go to the bridge/chorus but the phrase "Don't bore us, get to the chorus" was ringing in my ears from a Dave Grohl songwriting advice video!
@Tokenangmo - I understand your uneasiness about the association of the confederacy with the Klu Klux Klan but this song deliberately steers away from that and concentrates on how the ordinary people suffered. I thought I'd done enough to cancel out the racist/slavery thing. The "Southern Cross is burning" line refers to the flag being burnt by the victors and the conflagration of war. BTW, the Ku Klux Klan weren't actually formed until after the Civil War. Thanks for taking the time and trouble to read the lyrics:-)
Once again, thanks to you all. As for the 353 of you who listened but didn't bother to comment.......
my ar*se.
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