Hi guys, here's a little song I came up with the other day, took me all of 20 minutes (maybe it shows lol) it's a simple, happy song i've written for my young daughter. It's quite simple and childlike with the rhythm and lyrics but I guess it's supposed to be, I'm not happy with the last verse so i need to have a look at that again. My pitch is all over, i'm hoping one day i'll be able to sing in tune! Anyhow please let me know what you think to the song.
There you go making a mess
Doesn't matter when you're in that dress
Let's count together 1-2-3
Here we go with the ABC's
Chorus
I want to take you under the sea
Hideaway just you and me
I'll take your little hand
While we play in the soft white
Sand
2nd verse
What will you be when you grow old?
When everything's been bought and sold
A snowman, Postman, Ballerina?
Just you be a dreamer
3rd verse
So when you're all grown
And you've got kids of your own
Stop and think about this song
And remember where you're from