@rightly (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=20219)Tuba, yes.
Before even hearing the song I could see how the lyrics derive from a nihilistic punk point of view. Your 3/4 rhythm comment however, made me wonder what the end result would sound like.
A few minutes later: Now I know. May I say that I just love the tuba like brass-bass (or whatever it is). It somehow slows down the music in a pleasant way, as if you’ve already given up fighting those rich b*stards. Nicely done. My only comment would be that the song is a bit long.
Cheers, Dorian
Hey man , dig the 3/4 time
Yeah its pretty bad on power struggles
Another useless election , Why bother ,
Good job man !!!
This is interesting... I love the waltzy timing. That low rumbling brass (tuba?) is fantastic..
"Success would certainly kill you" - what a great line!!! Love the lyrics - as always you leave us to our own devices figuring out what the song is about although this might be a little more overt than most.
Piano part is great..
I love your stuff, @rightly (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=20219) - no news there!
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Maybe too long, for people in a rush.
That's an interessting piece for sure!
I like the harmonies, the brass things in the background and the piano. The guitar, however, is way too repetetive for me which makes the song sound a bit monotonous althought it isn't at all.
So I'd rework the guitar and make the rest louder :)
Hi @rightly (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=20219)
When I read the title I imagined the music being very similar which is interesting. It has a sort of Roger Waters vibe and is very engaging. You're lyrics always have a sharp insight and potent quality and I really appreciate that in your work. The instrumentation is great - the guitars sounds beautifully recorded and the whimsical quality of the song being pulled into a more sinister area with the discordant feel works very well.
Top work.
All the best,
CCB
This is a fabulous song @rightly (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=20219) I love the way that you’ve kept it fairy simple but intertwined hard hitting lyrics. I love songs that have a jolly musical direction and combat that with a well thought out message. Bravo !Lol yes,
Hola @rightly (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=20219)Well said, Mora.
This 3/4 has put the dance on my feet... the waltz of the vampires... A dance of realities that, more than dancing, digs a furrow in the ground that leaves the bones and remains of all of us exposed. ...
Good job!!
Hey man , dig the 3/4 time
Yeah its pretty bad on power struggles
Another useless election , Why bother ,
Good job man !!!
Yes, regarding politics
I tend to be a bit nihilistic
Not so in other aspects of living.
Thanks elvis.
The vocal sounds like it's coming up from the depths of history - a classic that fits the circumstances of any age. It's a message that needs to be repeated until there's some semblance of equality and a fading into obscurity of privilege.
Firstly, I'm loving the lyrics. The arrangement is totally off the wall in a very good way. The 3/4 waltz time works fabulously. I really like your music - it's like no other. This is one of your best imo. Excellent track :)