Hello Songwriter Forum members! Wrote down some lyrics today, and thought I should share them with you. I'm not a native speaker of the English language, so there might be some grammar mistakes, so feel free to guide me on the right track, and if you'd like give me some feedback on the song
Verse 1:I left this town
With a broken heart and a dime
I called her up
She said she needed some time
To be herself
To clear her head
There’s an empty space
Next to me in my bed
Chorus:Will it ever be enough
I am forever yours
Barely holding on
To the promises we told
I am yours to keep
I’ll protect you when you sleep
If I asked you
Would you say “I do”
I’m still holding on
To the dream of you
Verse 2:She got mad
When I said she’s been on my mind
She said it’s too late
To come back and make things right
When I’ve been away
For so long
I wasn’t there
When she needed me most
Chorus:Will it ever be enough
I am forever yours
Barely holding on
To the promises we told
I am yours to keep
I’ll protect you when you sleep
If I asked you
Would you say “I do”
I’m still holding on
To the dream of you
Bridge:I’m holding on
To what we had
I’m holding on
To the good days and the bad
Chorus:Will it ever be enough
I am forever yours
Barely holding on
To the promises we told
I am yours to keep
I’ll protect you when you sleep
If I asked you
Would you say “I do”
I’m still holding on
To the dream of you