Thanks, 2tuoo. You've come up with some really good ideas. I've already added reverb to the voice and panned some of the sounds. I'm going to play with your ideas with the percussion and the bass. Oh, and the scream. I appreciate all the helpful suggestions!
Vicki
PS: I'm locking this thread now, as I've moved the song over to "Finished Songs" for the Dark Side of the Tune challenge.