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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Feelings
« Last post by Elvis Nash on Today at 12:48:39 PM »Well if your not scared your not making enough mistakes to churn out something great , This is pretty close to it , so fear has its benefits
I find laughing at 9 feral cats and my dog barking at them helps at 5am
I find laughing at 9 feral cats and my dog barking at them helps at 5am
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Feelings
« Last post by moraamarolaloba on Today at 12:39:35 PM »Bueno, here life continues to give blows and scares but I still haven't fallen, I think I have become a laminated photo stuck to the wall 
Stay well @Elvis Nash
Stay well @Elvis Nash
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Feelings
« Last post by Elvis Nash on Today at 12:24:53 PM »Well the catfish aren't biting so I have time to say something
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Feelings
« Last post by moraamarolaloba on Today at 10:40:37 AM »Hola muchacho! Thank you again!! You are giving movement to the forum!!! Much appreciated, have a nice day! @Elvis Nash
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: All Because of You - Demo
« Last post by Elvis Nash on Yesterday at 09:12:41 PM »Hey Nick how are ya ?
Man real nice production on this , really enjoyed it !!!
A lot of cools things going on in right in places . I don't think you would call that a demo , more of a master recording Nick
Man real nice production on this , really enjoyed it !!!
A lot of cools things going on in right in places . I don't think you would call that a demo , more of a master recording Nick
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: All Because of You - Demo
« Last post by Bankie on Yesterday at 08:04:45 PM »So this is a really great song. I listened to Demo 3 right after btw, so comments really based more on that. Further to what I said on the WIP thread, I think the strings aren't really there yet. I love everything else (especially the guitar parts), but the strings are just "fine". They're being played more like a pad, but I think you have scope to make them a bit busier, particularly on phrases where there's no singing. You could use parts of the vocal melody in there, and play them like little motifs for example.
I feel slightly foolish because you're ahead of me in most regards of production, but that's what stands out to my ears. Great work as usual though.
I feel slightly foolish because you're ahead of me in most regards of production, but that's what stands out to my ears. Great work as usual though.
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Daydreamin‘
« Last post by moraamarolaloba on Yesterday at 11:08:27 AM »Nice to meet you, welcome to the bus!!! I enjoyed listening to your song, wonderful production, a very actual an balanced mix, vocals, arrangement, really catchy too!!!
Hasta luego!!! Nice lyrics! @Neumi
Hasta luego!!! Nice lyrics! @Neumi
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Feedback on Finished songs / Daydreamin‘
« Last post by Neumi on Yesterday at 12:17:45 AM »Hey guys, this is the first and only song I have recorded so far with the help of an amazing producer from sonic boom studios. I wish I had more time recording this. Especially for the vocals but it turned out ok I think. Its a song about getting lost in daydreams, trying to escape reality but not with the outcome one wished for.
https://on.soundcloud.com/kQFDLNrTkc5mNt1WA
Lyrics:
[Verse 1]
Yeah, it keeps me up
A feeling I can barely define
My thoughts in a rush
I‘m slowly losing track of time
[Pre-Chorus]
I find myself getting lost inside my head
Keep falling for those alluring mistakes
That I can‘t escape, locked every way to go
It‘s face to face against the well-unknown
[Chorus]
Yeah, I‘ve been daydreamin‘
My thoughts are deceiving
They put me through thin air
The edges of despair
I‘m late up daydreamin‘
[Post Chorus]
Yeah I‘ve been daydreamin‘
More than you know
My Thoughts are deceiving
Out of control
Like nightmare on Elm St.
There‘s no way to go
Yeah, I‘ve been daydreamin‘
More than you know
[Verse 2]
When I‘m losing grip
The moment that I realize
I start to overthink
My mood on static decline
[Pre-Chorus]
[Chorus]
[Post-Chorus]
[Bridge]
Hard times making it through my life
Dark times transcending through my mind
Someday I wake up and I‘ll be fine
One day I snap back to real life
[Chorus] Spoken
[Post-Chorus]
[Bridge/Outro]
https://on.soundcloud.com/kQFDLNrTkc5mNt1WA
Lyrics:
[Verse 1]
Yeah, it keeps me up
A feeling I can barely define
My thoughts in a rush
I‘m slowly losing track of time
[Pre-Chorus]
I find myself getting lost inside my head
Keep falling for those alluring mistakes
That I can‘t escape, locked every way to go
It‘s face to face against the well-unknown
[Chorus]
Yeah, I‘ve been daydreamin‘
My thoughts are deceiving
They put me through thin air
The edges of despair
I‘m late up daydreamin‘
[Post Chorus]
Yeah I‘ve been daydreamin‘
More than you know
My Thoughts are deceiving
Out of control
Like nightmare on Elm St.
There‘s no way to go
Yeah, I‘ve been daydreamin‘
More than you know
[Verse 2]
When I‘m losing grip
The moment that I realize
I start to overthink
My mood on static decline
[Pre-Chorus]
[Chorus]
[Post-Chorus]
[Bridge]
Hard times making it through my life
Dark times transcending through my mind
Someday I wake up and I‘ll be fine
One day I snap back to real life
[Chorus] Spoken
[Post-Chorus]
[Bridge/Outro]
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Lyrics / Dear, My Unknown Lover
« Last post by Neumi on May 03, 2024, 11:34:55 PM »Hey guys, here is a techno-pop ballad I wrote a while ago. It has some beautiful melodies but I dont have the recourses to record something. Lmk what you think
Dear, My Unknown Lover
[Chorus1]
Could any bone break prove my love
I‘ll be jumping down
Top of Burj Khalifa
Falling for so long
Knowing no one comes
I‘m bracing for impact
[Verse 1]
Dear my unknown lover,
I wrote you this heartfelt letter
Knowing it‘s time for me to grow
Open my heart to strangers laws
I‘ve been up for a minute
Looking for someone to commit with
To show me real love, I would give in
If only you were here right now
[Pre-Chorus]
I put you up
Into the sky
So you could be there from day to night
You‘re the stars and sunshine
Always want to have you in sight
[Chorus1]
[Chorus2]
I want a love so diamond rich
Or just a little taste
Of what I never get
Need someone to hold
Knowing no one comes
I‘m holding my own hand
[Verse 2]
Dear My Unknown Lover
Can‘t you leave my dreams when I want ya?
I‘d hand you my heart I wrapped in gold
Would give you my all then even more
I‘ve been up for a minute
Getting lost between strangers bedding
Not finding any love, my destiny
Why cant you prove me wrong right now?
[Pre-Chorus]
…
I will always be there in sight
Chorus
[Chorus1]
[Chorus2]
[Outro]
What the fuck love, give me just a little
Never had a piece of what could be heaven
Show me what is love, give me just a little
When I look at you, oh could that be heaven
2x
Dear, My Unknown Lover
[Chorus1]
Could any bone break prove my love
I‘ll be jumping down
Top of Burj Khalifa
Falling for so long
Knowing no one comes
I‘m bracing for impact
[Verse 1]
Dear my unknown lover,
I wrote you this heartfelt letter
Knowing it‘s time for me to grow
Open my heart to strangers laws
I‘ve been up for a minute
Looking for someone to commit with
To show me real love, I would give in
If only you were here right now
[Pre-Chorus]
I put you up
Into the sky
So you could be there from day to night
You‘re the stars and sunshine
Always want to have you in sight
[Chorus1]
[Chorus2]
I want a love so diamond rich
Or just a little taste
Of what I never get
Need someone to hold
Knowing no one comes
I‘m holding my own hand
[Verse 2]
Dear My Unknown Lover
Can‘t you leave my dreams when I want ya?
I‘d hand you my heart I wrapped in gold
Would give you my all then even more
I‘ve been up for a minute
Getting lost between strangers bedding
Not finding any love, my destiny
Why cant you prove me wrong right now?
[Pre-Chorus]
…
I will always be there in sight
Chorus
[Chorus1]
[Chorus2]
[Outro]
What the fuck love, give me just a little
Never had a piece of what could be heaven
Show me what is love, give me just a little
When I look at you, oh could that be heaven
2x
