Hi GZ,
Nice idea on the lyrics of this one.. Like the message..
'The robots...easily bought' doesn't flow well imo, but
you already
I like the vocal idea, just needs to be sung a bit more
confident and there were some unsharp notes (but sure
you'll fix that in the final work). Also I'd choose to
put a bit more energy in the vox, now they sound to
layed back to me for the powerful message you're
broadcasting.
Can hear a succesful final work in this one though, so
I hope my feedback was of any help. If not, feel free
to completely ignore!
MM