i wrote this song about something it's not completed as a song yet
but my brother read it and he didn't like it (he's a rapper)..., he told me that i should start all over again with another idea
but i'm going to post it here and i wish everyone give me his opinion... it's going to be like a rating system
different people, different faces
different lives ,different places
its a scary road and long distance
everyone's around me but still there's an absence
a mysterious feels locks us up in cages
like a withered flower between a blank pages
i'll be so happy to know your opinions