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What were the last two verses you wrote?

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Hooded Singer

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« on: November 02, 2016, 10:09:55 AM »
I can’t make it last
Let me take a leaf out of your past
Hell I would take the whole tree
If memories weren’t too much for me

Give me a guitar
Let me a write a song
Cause that’s the only thing
That’s going to connect me to where, you, are


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« Reply #1 on: November 02, 2016, 11:22:34 AM »
Just the verses? Okay:

I smile through the morning
And I grimace through the day
And I’ll answer all your questions
But I won’t have too much to say

These things I carry on my shoulders
They fit underneath my shirt
They say it will make me stronger
But they don’t say how much it hurts

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« Reply #2 on: November 02, 2016, 11:47:16 AM »
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If your hair is dank
That's rank
Free admission, nice condition
super highlights, full attention
Everything you want
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« Reply #3 on: November 02, 2016, 09:35:11 PM »
Indoctrination
Shadows from birth
Then a bump in the night
Youre no longer on earth

Take off the mask
and let in the light
A cakewalk awaits you
On the other side

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« Reply #4 on: November 03, 2016, 04:40:44 PM »
Cool thread

Leave bits of myself wherever I roam
You'll be vac'ing for weeks if I visit your home
Cos I'm peeling, I'm peeling right down to the bone
Skeletized, and completely alone

I'm runnjng out if time
I can feel it in my bones
Next time you come to see me
No one's home.

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« Reply #5 on: November 05, 2016, 09:35:47 AM »
Oh ... the fearsome beast is good to eat
and he don't take too much catchin'

I walked right up and punched him on the nose
And now we're eating scratchin'

... sorry, not really ... carry on!
They're, there, their  ...  They're all different!

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« Reply #6 on: November 05, 2016, 01:31:49 PM »
This is a cool thread! Interesting to see what the last verses people wrote were. I honestly can't remember the last full verses I wrote. I kinda work outta synch in comparison to may of the musos on here. Lately I've been coming up with hooks and lines sporadically for different parts of lyrics I'm working on- it'd be a hell of a lot easier if they came together in verse form!!!! Could tell you the last hook I came up with but then I'd have to kill y'all .....  :D

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« Reply #7 on: November 05, 2016, 03:19:12 PM »
I have bits lying all around the house, but I think these are the most recent two....

This one (maybe it needs to be split in two?)
Why can't we all come together?
Why can't we recognize each other as one human family?
Let's make the world a little better; join hands in solidarity.
Let's turn the darkness into light, transform the hatred into love,
Make the world a sanctuary that is safe for everyone.


And this one, actually two, but not the same song as above:
Oh dear, I need more stuff; I need money to spend.
My life is, oh, so rough. When will it ever end.
My neighbor on the left said his neighbor on the left
  bought a fancy new boat to go fishin' on the lake.
Then my neighbor on the right said his neighbor on the right
  had the nerve to ask him how much money does he make

I never have enough; I always need more stuff
There's always someone who has more than I do
I work from dusk till dawn; how long can I go on
[And one line is still missing]

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« Reply #8 on: November 06, 2016, 09:01:52 PM »
Will my kids know a world beyond povety, squaler and grief
Where science, art and hapiness dont give way to fear or blind belief
We all have to put our lives in the hands of strangers.
to ensure that which exists changes.

Surely if our voice is true we can lead ourselves to reason
whatever sense we make, it cannot be considered treason
we've all heard the tried and tested pleas
but the new wisdom will depend you and me
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