Hi all,
for anyone interested, this is where I am up to with this song. Please be aware this is only a rough mix, and there's real drums to go on it.
@pompeyjazz suggested that I use the title of this thread as the title for the song, which I did. Its ended up being called Stuck Inside a Cloud.
The lyrics aren't quite right yet, and I will fine tune them in the next couple of weeks.
I'm fairly happy with the arrangement though.