I really like it Kaf, very much!
I understand there's things not right on the production side, I could hear that, and I didn't think the melody of
the vocals worked on this part where the altered chords were,"It's only fair that I should let you go". There's timing issue's here and there BUT
I won't rabbit on about that though because you have already said you know it's not completely right and although the song was indeed quite long
I never got bored at any time.
As with all your stuff mate, the emotion and feeling is in there and to my ears I find that very attractive, regardless of any production errors.
You are beginning to experiment a lot more with the synth, it sounds like to me and not just strings and I really like that
You are spending time on layering and
arrangement. Sounds like there are new dimensions creeping into your stuff - brilliant!
Loved that Zither type sound you used. Was that done with keyboards?
Well done on the vocals too mate. I love your energy and commitment to them
Cangratulations mate. Another very good song!