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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: You (are not broken)
« Last post by rightly on Today at 02:09:20 PM »
Yes, this is a fine thing
Unusual and refreshing
The voice uncompromisingly theatrical but sounds authentic.
The words and sentiment are sympathetic and coherent.
The listen brought vague images of beauty and the beast.
Where the beast is actually quite handsome,
often well dressed but looks dignified in rags.

You Are an interesting artist.
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Feedback on Finished songs / Don't blame me
« Last post by Elvis Nash on Today at 02:05:17 PM »
https://hearthis.at/elvis-nash-xk/dont-blame-me-take-1/v9H/







https://hearthis.at/elvis-nash-xk/dont-blame-me-demo-2/U0v/


I'm lazy to write a new song , its a lot of work and I push myself to hard , So I'll cut this , its in my key
So Nick that's how I do it , work tape to tracks
Willie Nelson had a funny story , He was sent the "Gambler" Man i got to many songs , I don't wanna learn them lyrics 
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: New Edwardians
« Last post by Paul V on Today at 01:56:31 PM »
Man, you've just transported me to The Cavern.  So much to admire here John:  Excellent production, cool guitar sounds and a fine vocal.  Great energy and style.  I'd welcome more of this, please!

Paul
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Hearts Mend
« Last post by Paul V on Today at 01:53:49 PM »
I love the message that you have delivered here.  It's a song of hope when oftentimes it may be in short supply.  The production here is quality.  I love country music and it is always playing in my car during my work commute.  I think that the output from many modern country writers is interesting, accomplished and melodic.  George Strait's 'How 'bout them cowgirls' is perhaps my favourite of this genre and also I adore the music of Miranda Lambert.  'Bluebird' is excellent!  Good luck with your promotion and welld done presenting a fine song.

Paul
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: This is Not a Test
« Last post by Paul V on Today at 01:41:47 PM »
A lovely classical intro that draws us into a melody and production fitting of a Bond theme.  It's got that Bond-like guitar sound too.
The lyrics are very well written.  I love the pause before the chorus.  This song benefits from the inclusion of a real drummer. Moving into the middle-eight section, we're into Robbie Williams territory when he partnered with Guy Chambers. As always, you go the extra mile with really cool backing vocals and they don't overcrowd the production with their inclusion. I love saxophone but I'd lift it above the instrumentation.  At the moment, the piano is more prominent. There's a big reward to you as a songwriter for continuously flexing your writing muscles.  Kudos to you!

Paul
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The Bar / Re: You Haven’t Seen The Last Of Me
« Last post by Paul V on Today at 01:30:12 PM »
Shades of The Jam @PaulAds,  Unexpected chord changes adorn this composition.  I find it very impressive that you have found the motivation to revisit the past.  The highlight for me is your bass, guitar playing and production.  I think that you are a finer songwriter today.  I've listened to your new album and it is a quality listen.  Killer couplets in abundance and melody to match!

Paul
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Hearts Mend
« Last post by Elvis Nash on Today at 01:25:25 PM »
The Elvis Nash Drama on radio stations

Good morning, Mr Elvis Nash

You talked about the PayPal link. it belongs to management cashier's they alone receive payment and to be sure if who made the deposit you will have to send a screenshot to confirm your payment deposit so an order will be given to proceed with your promotion! your payment isn't being confirm by me i don't have anything to do with that. am not on the secretary's] department that's why a screenshot is being asked so i will have to give to them to confirm and then we proceed, am all about helping talent and promoting the artist, it's your musical career we are talking about! if you think am after your money then you must be a joke cause it goes to the cashier's [ secretary's ] team all i do is you send you screenshots as prove of payment and i give to them to confirm. am on the promotion field team. i can't break the rules i will only make you understand the rules, thank you.
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Feedback on Finished songs / In the Rain
« Last post by moraamarolaloba on Today at 01:08:35 PM »
When I look around and see all the good that surrounds me I feel infinite gratitude but at the same time my eyes fill with tears when I think about what happens beyond my limbo, it is a strange sensation to feel that you live in a world full of worlds apart, hostile, wild and inhuman.
I often dream that I fly over a field full of graves marked with crosses... and when I wake up I cannot forget the pain that sleeps at the bottom of everything.
This song was born at a special moment, remembering those who suffer.



Today it rains
in the field of the dead
while I walk
reading their names
reading their names
written in chalk
on crosses of blackboard

landscape that Life
planted in my soul
and that I leave behind
dancing in the rain
to feel me alive
despite the graves
despite their voices
calling me

Dancing in the rain
to feel me alive
despite the graves
despite their voices
calling me

i dance
i dance
for them for me
the fog is chasing me x4


The fog
the fog
dense cloud that does not fly
but is enough
to hide any meaning

and while I walk
I feel devoured
by the shadow of what cannot be changed
and while I walk
I feel devoured
by the shadow of what cannot be changed


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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Hearts Mend
« Last post by Elvis Nash on Today at 11:49:26 AM »
It all flows well enough George , its just my style
Thanks
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Hearts Mend
« Last post by Elvis Nash on Today at 11:30:50 AM »
Layered vocals ?, It's just some African Gospel singers from Africa . BZ Lewis the producer felt it didn't need a lot of BGVS to get in the way of me , its a bit slick and traditional collide,   thanks for listening . I just do my songs and promote some , sell cds , I think it's almost impossible to ROI in music , Maybe if your sponsored you could , AI mess will not help either .  I told the radio station to call me first , they did not , So fuck them , The radio station in England called me and we had a nice chat , But i think the other one is a scam , So nope
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