I see you've been with us for awhile, but you haven't been participating in the normal give and take of forum life. I suggest you check out the guidelines for the "Finished Songs" and "Works in Progress" and get involved at a deeper level. You'll find you get a better response when you're spending some of your time reviewing other works.
Do you have any music in mind for these lyrics yet? To me, this looks like an early draft of a song. That's just me, and I'm far from an expert so, if you don't agree, just ignore me.
If you do agree, though, here are some thoughts. First of all, you're rhyming words with themselves. I strongly recommend finding rhyming words, rather than simply using the same word again.
Then some of the lines feel to me like they've been chosen simply because they rhyme, not because they add to the song. Like, "Call me unnamed" and "Never taken any meds". Or it could be I'm just not getting your point. I tend to be a bit dense that way.
Anyway, that's a couple of my thoughts. I hope they're helpful.
Vicki