Very cool guys. I love the lyrics and nice playing as always by Yodas pops. It's a great song!!
However...
Regarding the singing, I'm just gonna be honest and say that I don't think u need the processing that you put on your vocals here mate (I'm talking about the pitching tools u use) obviously reverb,EQ and compression are fine, but on THIS track the auto tune gives the vocal an ever so slight wavey/unnatural sound. Which I don't think is ideal for this genre. (It may not be auto tune, but when I've tried to use it in the past my vocals sounded similar.)
Listen it's by no means a deal breaker, the melody is awesome. It sounds fine enough, but you are a very gifted producer and so I'm holding you to a higher standard mate! Sorry, but it's your own fault!
My rather rambling point is that I reckon you could sing this ten times and comp together a wonderful natural take without the wizardry.
I hope u take that in the spirit that it's intended mate. I hope u know I don't mean any offence.
The only other thing I picked up on that might just be my ears, is in the FIRST chorus, I think one of the jangly guitars is slightly off time...like I said I can't be sure, but something is making it sound just a little too busy, if u get my meaning.
Anyway I hope this is of some use to you going forward guys.
Best of luck with it!
Leo