Hello igg,
Not posted for a while, missed you bigtime. Have to agree with Verlon, this is quality, it usually is with you, that's why i missed you.
Hello igg,
Not posted for a while, so welcome back, missed you bigtime, you always add quality. Have to agree with Verlon, great stuff, line after line, flows so smooth. Only one line that doesn't work for me, and that's in the chorus.
Your life is following too close
It's not bad, just sounds a little awkward. But that's nothing compared to the rest. Don't leave it too long till next time.
Vintage54