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JasonMc

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« on: August 12, 2011, 12:09:13 AM »
Hey everyone! I wrote this song after going through a pretty hard break up. Writing it helped me a lot, so I hope you enjoy.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4wHvQQ8Ac5k

Love to know what you think :)

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« Reply #1 on: August 14, 2011, 09:38:21 AM »
Holy shit man take a breath ;)

Love it Jason, so original, brilliant strumming which creates a superb rythmn

Love the lyrics, the humour shining through and the sadness

This is really unique and brilliant

I also love the fact you keep Vaseline beside your bed  ;D

Great song mate :)

jim morrison

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« Reply #2 on: August 14, 2011, 12:50:42 PM »
Great song mate ,very roots ,i think you could also feature some percussion there, bongo drums maybe
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JasonMc

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« Reply #3 on: August 14, 2011, 02:50:22 PM »
Thanks a lot guys!

I'm not much of a singer (more of an mc) but I thought I would give it a go.

It's great to hear the positive feedback.

And yeah the vaseline is a bit of a fail haha but I'm not ashamed to say that I am a man who gets the occasional dry lips.

And I am planning on including some percussion in my future tunes.

:)