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SoundBuckle

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« on: August 06, 2011, 08:24:49 PM »
Hi everyone, this is something I've written this weekend. I'm not it's too great, but would love some feedback from others. It's written about a girl I know, who I used to be pretty good friends with. I don't wanna give you the entire story about why we're not friends anymore, as you can draw your own conclusions from the lyrics!

Thanks in advance,

Rob.


You waste your time spreading paint on your face
So people look upon you, and smile with a little grace
The codes been broken
Your friendship's choking
Trying to cope by drinking and smoking
Hoping tomorrow brings a change of pace.

You've spent your life telling people false truths
Talking what you want, thinking you've got naught to lose.
But now it's over
You wish you'd told her
Trying to cry without your shoulder.
No doubt she's gonna cut you loose.

-Chorus-
Money. Money. It's all you need,
A stubborn princess from star to sea.
Your walls are falling brick by brick,
Like a metronome that's lost it tick.
-End Chorus-

You used to laze around obscured by your disguise
Welcome to the real world - no rooms in which to hide.
So pick your face
Hold out your plate,
Nobody knows for you what awaits.
Jump off your high horse and take down your shrine.

Chorus x 2

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« Reply #1 on: August 07, 2011, 02:28:27 PM »
Good lyrics. The type that flow well making them easier to write a melody to.

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« Reply #2 on: August 07, 2011, 03:47:08 PM »
nice imaginative lyrics, the whole things works well, keep em comin :)