[dinnerwithgreedo]

Posted this before but it now has a chorus!!! Not sure of the lyrics though.

It was recorded using the SoundCloud iPhone app so don't expect ANY production.

Enjoy
http://snd.sc/pHK0YJ

LYRICS

Happy, i hope that you're happy
Now i'm not around to love you everyday
Smiling, i hope that you're smiling
Now i'm not around to see it everyday

Dear Josie i feel blue
Dear Josie i miss you
Dear Josie is it true
Dear Josie i'll come through

Take care, i hope that you take care
Now i'm not around to see you everyday
Lonely, i'm ever so lonely
Now you're not around to love me everyday

Dear Josie i feel blue
Dear Josie i miss you
Dear Josie is it true
Dear Josie i'll come through

[Kafla]

Still love the song DWG but too many Dear Josies for me in the chorus 

[jim morrison]

Good song mate ,nice and chilled out on a summers evening

[dinnerwithgreedo]

Thank guys.

@Kafla I know what you mean... but it might be the hook

[Kafla]

Your probably  right DWG

For me the lyrics dont work on paper but work wonderfully well within the song!

[dinnerwithgreedo]

Your probably  right DWG

For me the lyrics dont work on paper but work wonderfully well within the song!

Christ! I'm rubbish at lyrics so i'm glad you think they're working well.

[Kafla]

They work really well, even my wife said so

It's the fingerpicking, the melody, the story they tell - when it's real it always works

[dinnerwithgreedo]

They work really well, even my wife said so

It's the fingerpicking, the melody, the story they tell - when it's real it always works

I've always said your wife talks a lot of sense.

[Kafla]

 

[cheff daniel]

lovely little song again. if this is still in progress im curious wat else you gonna do with it.

gr.  Dan

[dinnerwithgreedo]

lovely little song again. if this is still in progress im curious wat else you gonna do with it.

gr.  Dan

There's another version recorded that has a lot more going on with it. It's strumed... which changes things.

[postmn]

its nice and chilled, i guess the melody makes the lyrics in this song.keep em comin

[spacedogg]

hey paul, i haven't been on for a while... and this is soooo good. said it before, say it again... your sense of melody really works for me. if only i had the resources and wasn't so effing poor, we would be making you an album, coz the world needs an album of greedotunes. this is just my personal taste and i don't mean to diss anyone else on here, but you're one of my top five 'best artists' on this forum. keep it coming dude. 

[dinnerwithgreedo]

hey paul, i haven't been on for a while... and this is soooo good. said it before, say it again... your sense of melody really works for me. if only i had the resources and wasn't so effing poor, we would be making you an album, coz the world needs an album of greedotunes. this is just my personal taste and i don't mean to diss anyone else on here, but you're one of my top five 'best artists' on this forum. keep it coming dude. 

Thank you so much. I'm honoured.

[Paul]

Hi DWG,

I enjoyed your first demo of this song.  The addition of the chorus, has made this even better. 

Well done,

Paul