Hi good forum people!
I´m issuing a new (but slightly older) song this time. A bit less experimental in it´s form so it should be easier to follow already at first listen. It is actually a Country-tune that I wrote some ten years ago but I have reworked it to fit into my new electronic retro-style.
It is a demo and I am thinking of taking it for one more round. Better singing, more dynamic drum programming and a better fade-out with less repeating of the song melody.
But I would appreciate some feedback on the overall construction of the song, the flow of the actual composition. Maybe some thought that me myself never thought off (sometimes I
really miss being in a band…)
It goes like this ´n hope you like it:
https://soundcloud.com/skogge/i-am-not-the-hero-hereYes… Lyrics as follows (please point out any blatant errors on my part):
I Am Not The Hero HereWaking every morning
to the sunshine
or to snowflakes falling
Even if I looked
I wouldn´t care
But if you forced me to reveal
what kind of day I prefer
I might tell you
that I like my days to be
just a little bit warmer
Well I don´t care who wins the war
who wears the crown
or who is poor
I don´t think it has
to do with me
But if you made me take the stand
I might just stand up and demand
that everyone should get
just what they need
to be the ones they want to be
Ooh everyone should get
just what they need
to be the ones they want to be
that would change a lot you see
But I am not the hero here
I think I never be
one of those who make a difference
one of those who makes a mark
on history
that is okay
Because I know I been here
long enough
I´m almost overdue
But pushing on a tiny distance
Make a little change for me and you
That is okayI know there is a golden rule
of how to live my life
But of the man who says it´s golden
him I don´t know anything about (x4)