If you don't make an attempt to specify the reasons you're forever alone, communicate to the audience the truly foul fate forcing you to be forever alone, it's just going to come off whiny. We won't empathize and be understanding without being significantly compelled to. Poetically, lyrically, nobody responds well to generic, vague expressions of an experience. We understand it, but it doesn't make us FEEL it so we don't care. Either you have serious issues causing you to be unlovable or you're being melodramatic and just want attention and sympathy. Apologies for being boorishly blunt but better I be a bearably blunt boor than unbearably kind. Also all your lyrics seem to be expressing exactly the same thing. Is it really necessary to post them all rather than just the best of them?
Also, I've been known to be wrong....or perhaps i'm known for being wrong....
