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She's In Deep
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fischermans
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Reply #15 on:
December 29, 2018, 07:03:46 PM »
Cool song reminds me on The smiths. May the start is a bit rugged.I like your singing and what you do with your voice, only the last part from 2.30 on I'm not 100% happy with the singing. Anyway a nice listen, well done.
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MonnoDB
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Reply #16 on:
December 30, 2018, 01:16:02 PM »
Hey
@jacksimmons
- what a cool, catchy, pop song. I really loved it.. I also feel that harmonies would really enhance it - in the places you've noted.. Funny how tastes differ - I really like the "forget she exists line" - stuck out for me in a good way... Exciting to hear you've an album nearly complete. Good luck with it - quality stuff...
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Movin Flavour
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December 30, 2018, 01:18:38 PM »
Beautiful song.
I thought it was going to be like Talking Heads to start off, but then I got hints of There She Goes by the LA's.
Great singing.
Enjoyed this
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Skub
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December 30, 2018, 06:21:58 PM »
Yo Jack.
So good to hear your songs again.
You are a youth with the soul of the 60s deep inside. Don't change to all the others trying to be Ed Sheeran!
Could be on the radio in my world.
Good luck with the album man,but from what I hear you'll not need luck.
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