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Title: Long Run
Post by: greenburst on July 18, 2012, 10:19:18 AM

Hi there,

any feedback would be appreciated. Do you get the meaning of that song?

Thank you
Frank

Long Run

It's been a long run
since I left you behind
while you were growing
my little tiny corn.

It's been a long run
for me to realize
from the pieces I taken
you were cut and sliced.

Chorus:
And I want you to know
whatever you'll grow
I'll be always there for you.
If you get out of my eyes
you'll never outta sight
nor out of my mind.

It's been a long run
to relieve you from suffering
I tried always to care
for your wounds I scared

Chorus

"Middle 8"

Chorus

It's been a long time
until you got full-blown
you grown up into blossom
... with or without my own.

Title: Re: Long Run
Post by: S.T.C on July 18, 2012, 04:47:24 PM

It`s strange,,,maybe you could elaborate.I get the corn thing..is that it?
A folky type song.