A few notes before reading:
This song is based on real life events.
The references to "Zoe" and "Who will give a fuck now?" are references to another song called "Zoe doesn't give a fuuuuuuuuck", which I may post but I'm not sure it's perfect yet (well neither is this, but that one is literally a first draft). All you need to know is, the story of that song is that I had a crush on "Zoe" and she didn't give a fuck, lol.
The "chocolate crusha" joke is because I'm half black and Crusha is a brand of milkshake mix haha. It's supposed to be funny but also convey the meaning that I am someone with a crush. A crush-er. but I think the ridiculous humour is out of place in the dark song. There are other wacky flares in the song but mostly it's supposed to be sort of depressing.
My concept for the finished song is that it will be like a dark twisted dance anthem, hence the idea of centering it around something superficial like "Vodka" and the "Get me on ya, I don't know ya, But I want ya" sort of simple commercial pop lyricism. It was initially supposed to have far less words so that it could be more repetative like those sorts of songs but I felt like I wasn't getting the message across. It's not supposed to really sell as a dance anthem though, it's just a concept peice.
(Heartbeat sounds)
I,
I can’t breathe,
I can’t see… straight,
You words are in my chest,
They eat me up,
Eat my soul,
Leave me empty,
I need another spirit,
Fill me up,
(transitions into danceable music with a steady beat)
Vodka,
Get me on ya.
Vodka
Yeah, I want ya.
Drowning in the Northern lights that shroud the mob of strangers,
Your face is what I look for,
To dance with you, my friend.
Waves your body makes, the magnets from your skin to mine,
Damn, I know what I want but no,
I’m happy you’re my friend.
But you don’t dance tonight.
Beauty melted in phone light.
Don’t wanna dance with me, you cow.
Finally you spit out,
TELL ME WHY, TELL ME WHY
You wanna dance with Zoe now.
SOMEBODY DANCE WITH ME,
ANYBODY.
Vodka,
Get me on ya,
I don’t know ya,
But I want ya,
Vodka,
I want your tongue to taste,
I’ve got some love to waste,
You’ll cure my heart’s mistakes,
With vodka.
Ethanol is toxic and I’m stumbling to my deathbed,
Who will give a fuck now?
A stranger, I don’t mind.
All these eyes are oggling me, two-timing chocolate crusha,
I need to hide inside your mouth,
Stranger, aren’t you kind.
There’s vodka in my tears,
And pain beyond my years,
I realised I’m a joke,
HAHAHA HAHAHA,
I wish she never spoke.
I wish I never loved her.
Hahahahaha
ARE YOU HORNY?
SO AM IIIIIII!
Vodka,
Get me on ya,
I don’t know ya,
But I want ya,
Vodka,
Attract your skin to mine,
I’m scared; it’s my first time,
But I so need some I am dying,
And crying tears of,
Vodka,
Get me on ya,
I don’t know ya,
But I want ya,
Vodka,
Your tongue’s bittersweet taste,
I’ve put myself to waste,
Please cure my heart’s mistakes.
With vodka,
Vodka,
Vodka,
Vodka.
(Danceable instrumental part fades into heartbeats)
I,
I can’t breathe,
I can’t see… straight,
You words are in my chest,
They eat me up,
Eat my soul,
Leave me empty,
And sick,
I poisoned my body for my soul.