Yo Lynn,Keith and Dave.
I dig the electric folk feel to the song and the great vocal delivery,very bittersweet and totally captivating.
I know you lot plot your very own course and the world is surely a better place for that,but there are a couple of things I'll mention,then you can ignore!
I'd love a more audible bass.
Don't have the lead guitar playing after every line,or pulled way down in the mix,or both! For me it detracts from the song,too busy and too...there. (Sorry Keith)
Then again,if you listened to folk like me,you'd be yet another verse/chorus outfit!