You write amazing as always
@Dogmax You tell a story with your words, that adds a picture in my head, and that is an ability I appreciate! I wonder what thoughts you have when it comes to the music to play along with the lyrics? I could hear possibly some slow piano ballad stuff or something in that direction, or something in the Clapton direction.
If you add another verse, I could see that the last verse you have now, could be the end verse of the song, cause it sounds like a good ending. Anyways, it was a brilliant read as always from you