It was nice, not necessarily my cup of tea though tbh.
A couple of timing issues throughout (such as one of the delays in the second verse). Could use some work in broadening the rhythm section; can't tell if there is a kick or not (if there is, I can't feel it). Could also use some more low end support for a wider feel. On an upside, I do like some of the guitar ambiances; could be pushed more to the sides though especially on the hooks. Since it has sort of an airy feel to it, you could express more with texture pads or a wider rhythm guitar line during the hooks to make those explode a bit and be a bit different than the verses.
Overall, a nice demo. Still needs work but not a bad start.